Journal Q&A

I am still finishing up my writing project. It seems I am never satisfied with my writing. I focused on sleep paralysis and strangely enough I experienced it last night.  That’s the third time this quarter and I after reading all three articles I think I should go see a sleep specialist. Or maybe I just need more sleep. Haha. Overall, I am happy I got to read and write about this topic even though it was hard to elaborate on my ideas when it came to writing my paper. On Monday, the comment about the structure of my paper was very helpful. I realized my sentences didn’t make sense sometimes or they went off on tangents. Also, my partner suggested to break up my sentences they way we did in class. This was helpful because I was able to weave out any unnecessary information and focus on what’s important for my argument. I kept in mind Zack’s comment to “go back” to my thesis at the end of each paragraph. This helps the reader keep the focus on the argument. I tried my best to make the last sentence of every paragraph tie back to my argument.